Poetry Sharing Thread

haphazardnuke · Post by **haphazardnuke** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:23 am

I see what you did
with the paren-d section.
Double haiku. Nice.

Rianaru · Post by **Rianaru** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:26 am

Thank you haphazard
nuke, I enjoy making these.
Have a nice day now!

EDIT: fixed -.-

jorgebonafe · Post by **jorgebonafe** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:35 am

Oh, Rianaru
I don't think you realize
you got your count wrong

Rianaru · Post by **Rianaru** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:48 am

Jorgebonafe,
I apologize for that.
It is fixed sir.

jorgebonafe · Post by **jorgebonafe** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:15 pm

Reference is gone
My old post makes no more sense
I feel empty now

Talarga08 · Post by **Talarga08** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:20 pm

jorgebonafe wrote: Yeah... Orange... way to ruin any possible rhymes...

Sorry about the rhymes i broke.
But I see you're doing haikus now,
I'd follow you but I don't know how

jorgebonafe · Post by **jorgebonafe** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:23 pm

it's very easy
just do five seven and five
and you're good to go

Post by **FlowerChild** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:51 pm

There once was a boy from Saskatoon...

Rianaru · Post by **Rianaru** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:52 pm

Who was always quite the loon...

Post by **FlowerChild** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:53 pm

He had three fighting pit-bulls...

Post by **Sarudak** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:54 pm

That he often used to hunt voles.

walker_boh_65 · Post by **walker_boh_65** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:54 pm

. . .who was not birthed from the womb. . .

EDIT: Damn, ninja'd. Got nothing left.

Post by **FlowerChild** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:59 pm

Sigh...guys...you must learn the art of the limerick. It is probably the height of western culture...

From:

"...three fighting pit-bulls".

...

"And a pocket full of menthals"

"And to passing cars he would moon".

Now that's art :)

Rianaru · Post by **Rianaru** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:16 pm

FlowerChild wrote:Sigh...guys...you must learn the art of the limerick. It is probably the height of western culture...

Maybe we should improve western culture...Anyone interested in painting vaguely phallic masterpieces?

Elensaar · Post by **Elensaar** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:21 pm

FlowerChild wrote:Sigh...guys...you must learn the art of the limerick. It is probably the height of western culture...

Like so?

The is a child of the flower
That from rampaging trolls will not cower
He throws us a bone
Says we will return Home
And thus keeps us all in his power

;)

Post by **FlowerChild** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:22 pm

Elensaar wrote: Like so?

There you go :)

Elensaar · Post by **Elensaar** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:27 pm

I wasn't too slow?

Post by **FlowerChild** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:31 pm

Elensaar wrote:I wasn't too slow?

No more than someone on blow.

Gargantuan_Penguin · Post by **Gargantuan_Penguin** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:39 pm

"There once was a man from the moon
His sisters all called him a loon,
But when they were dead
He had cheese for a bed
and a thousand young artists for hire."

Itamarcu · Post by **Itamarcu** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 3:28 am

Gargantuan_Penguin wrote:"There once was a man from the moon
His sisters all called him a loon,
But when they were dead
He had cheese for a bed
and a thousand young artists for hire."

No, no, no...the last line needs to rhyme with the first two.

It's supposed to be:
A
A
B
B
A

Horizon · Post by **Horizon** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 4:56 am

What is going on?
I don't have the slightest clue.
I just stabbed a cow.

Itamarcu · Post by **Itamarcu** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 5:02 am

Horizon wrote:What is going on?
I don't have the slightest clue.
I just stabbed a cow.

You are sacrificed
To the ancient forum gods.
Stabbing cows is bad.

Post by **FlowerChild** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 5:14 am

Poor cows.

Eriottosan · Post by **Eriottosan** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 7:13 am

There is a cruel villain named Steve,
Whose home land he was forced to leave,
But he has a plan,
That dark, evil man,
And revenge he will one day achieve.

His strength must not be dismissed,
He can punch through stone with his fist,
And zombies and spiders,
And skeleton riders,
Can't kill him as he will subsist.

Mass slaughter is one of his goals,
Along with harvesting souls.
He traps them in steel,
And more damage can deal
With enchants from ill-gained arcane scrolls.

And so it's abundantly clear,
That he was banished in fear.
But this tale you must hark,
For the future is dark,
As his return Home draws near ...

Post by **FlowerChild** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:14 pm

*clap clap clap*

Very nice :)

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